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Ngo Nguyen Posted 9 years ago
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One reason for being concern in animal extinction is climate change. Climate change is an irregular difference in weather patterns found in a place, which could be usual the changing of temperature in a place for a month or season. In recent times, an increase in the temperature leads to warmer globe which affects animals in different ways. Global warming has affected Arctic ice which is melting at a faster speed than was anticipated even a few years ago.For example, many Arctic animals such as polar bears, walrus, and seals lose places to live. In addition, the raising of temperature also brings about the change of ecosystems. Some species in ecosystem are being ejected from their places or probably to be endangered because environment’s conditions were changed. As Stephen Henry Schneider points out, the increase in the global temperature of around 4 degrees Celsius by 2100 would result in major extinctions around the world

  

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Ngo Nguyen One reason for being concern in animal extinction is climate change. For ago. For Ngo Nguyen lose places lose their places Ngo Nguyen their places or probably to be their homes or probably will be the ecosystem/the environment Ending punctuation.

  • Ngo Nguyen One reason for being concern in animal extinction is climate change.
  • For ago.
  • For Ngo Nguyen lose places lose their places Ngo Nguyen their places or probably to be their homes or probably will be the ecosystem/the environment Ending punctuation.
  • Passive Voice- sentences not in subject+verb+direct object (SVO) order Ngo Nguyen Some species in ecosystem are being ejected from their places or probably to be endangered because environment’s conditions were changed.
  • Subject-species Verbs-being/ejected/endangered/be/were Direct Objects-places/conditions/changed Rewritten: Some species in the ecosystem are ejected from their homes or likely endangered because of the environmental changes.
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Ngo NguyenOne reason for being concern in animal extinction is climate change.

for being concern (tenses) for having a concern or being concerned

in-about

Ngo Nguyencould be usual the changing

could be the usual changing

Ngo Nguyena month or season

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