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Aesthetics Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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I was wondering if anyone could proof read this for me...this is the first part of my essay. I'd like to know where my major problem is. Thank you very much indeed!
The norm that democracies do not fight wars against one another but autocracies has become the dominant mode of interaction in world politics. Dean Babst, Small and Singer described this trend in their quantitative studies, following by Rudolph Rummel and Michael Doyle with use of the term "liberal peace" for argument building. After the Cold War, Bruce Russett systematically introduced the theory in his book, in which the norm of "democratic peace" was recorded developing since the nineteenth century and thriving with the increasing number of democracies in the 1970s. As a legacy of the Cold War, democratic peace divides the world's states into two groups, democratic and non-democratic-- liberalism held by the former creates "separate peace"among them while leads to harsher war against the latter. In contrast to offensive realists' claim "the more power, the more peace" , or defensive realist statement "where there is assurance, there is peace" , democratic peace theory highlights domestic institutions and liberal norms, arguing that "where there is liberalism, there is peace".
This is the first time I visit this website. So say hi first!
I was wondering if anyone could proof read this for me...this is the first part of my essay. I'd like to know where my major problem is. Thank you very much indeed!
The norm that democracies do not fight wars against one another but autocracies has become the dominant mode of interaction in world politics. Dean Babst, Small and Singer described this trend in their quantitative studies, following by Rudolph Rummel and Michael Doyle with use of the term "liberal peace" for argument building. After the Cold War, Bruce Russett systematically introduced the theory in his book, in which the norm of "democratic peace" was recorded developing since the nineteenth century and thriving with the increasing number of democracies in the 1970s. As a legacy of the Cold War, democratic peace divides the world's states into two groups, democratic and non-democratic-- liberalism held by the former creates "separate peace"among them while leads to harsher war against the latter. In contrast to offensive realists' claim "the more power, the more peace" , or defensive realist statement "where there is assurance, there is peace" , democratic peace theory highlights domestic institutions and liberal norms, arguing that "where there is liberalism, there is peace".
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hi, if there is no one answer this po, does it mean that people find no problem in the paragraph?
- hi, if there is no one answer this po, does it mean that people find no problem in the paragraph?
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hi, if there is no one answer this po,
does it mean that people find no problem in the paragraph?
does it mean that people find no problem in the paragraph?
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Probably not; it more likely means that no one felt ready or had time to examine it.
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...but it's short, so I'll do it now. (By the way, welcome to English Forums, Aesthetics.)
That democracies do not fight wars against one another but against autocracies has become the dominant mode of interaction in world politics. Dean Babst, Small and Singer described this trend in their quantitative studies, following Rudolph Rummel and Michael Doyle in the use of t
That democracies do not fight wars against one another but against autocracies has become the dominant mode of interaction in world politics. Dean Babst, Small and Singer described this trend in their quantitative studies, following Rudolph Rummel and Michael Doyle in the use of t
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Your part of the essay is very nice, plz write the whole. Sent by:- Neeraj
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