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I am studying small college because they are many advantages. First of all I have the opportunity to ease of admission and select smaller campuses because of the smaller class sizes. I will have more contact with my professors both in and out of the classroom and I can time saving on moving, low living cost because of my house near school about 30kms . I can meet professors from that department who serves as my advisor. Although , large college is often offer more majors than college do. But smail college offers more unique majors as well as personalized majors

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bee cat This is my paragraph . Please fix the grammatical errors. ~~to gammartical~~

Here are some grammatical errors in the first sentence. Study your errors so you can write better English.

bee catI am studying small college because ...

I am studying English. (The object of the verb "study" is the content, not the place. )
I am studying computer programming.
I am studying History.

I am studying in the kitchen. (The place is shown by a prepositional phrase.)
I am studying at the library.
I am studying at Oxford University.

bee cat... because they are many advantages.

"They" refers to a plural noun that is mentioned earlier.

I like my classmates because they are helpful. (They refers to classmates.)
I like my book because it is easy to read. (It refers to book.)

Besides is a college the same as advantage? No. You can't use the verb "be."

Small colleges are schools for high school graduates.
A smaller class size is an advantage.

Can you try to fix your first sentence?

You might study the paragraphs here to learn grammatically correct ways to write your paragraph. Use this source as a guide.

https://www.bestvalueschools.com/lists/5-advantages-of-attending-a-small-college/

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