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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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oujr solar system includes the sun and all the planets, moon dwarf planets and asteroids that orbit around it the four planets closest to the sun include mercury venus earth and mars these inner planets are made of rock and metals they are quite small compared to the outer planets the four outer planets are called gas giants because they are made mostly of gases th4e outer planets include jupiter saturn uranus and neptune. The most well known dwarf planet in the solar system is pluto
  

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You can begin by helping yourself: Break this jumble of words into sentences. Begin each sentence with a capital letter, and end with a full stop. Begin the name of each planet with a capital letter.

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  • You can begin by helping yourself: Break this jumble of words into sentences.
  • Begin each sentence with a capital letter, and end with a full stop.
  • Begin the name of each planet with a capital letter.
  • Put a comma after each item in a list, for example, I have worked in China , Estonia , Turkey , and the Czech Republic.
  • Post your corrected paragraph here, and we'll make any further corrections needed.
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You can begin by helping yourself:

Break this jumble of words into sentences.
Begin each sentence with a capital letter, and end with a full stop.
Begin the name of each planet with a capital letter.
Put a comma after each item in a list, for example, I have worked in China, Estonia, Turkey, and the Czech Republic.

Post your corrected para
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Anonymousmoon dwarf planets
Moons are not the same as dwarf planets.
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