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In these ages and days, many scientists tend to discover more about nuclear and the use of them. However, some people said that it is dangerous that nuclear weapons may harm to our planet. Despite providing a huge of energy and a low cost, the limit of using nuclear technology should be encouraged because of the potential danger of this material. Therefore, I believed that the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits.

It is advantageous that nuclear power is used in our daily lives. There is one of the cleanest energy in the world. Whereas many energies are limited and influenced by the environment, nuclear power is infinite and harmless. Furthermore, nuclear is used as an important material in measuring weapons to prepare wars.

Notwithstanding providing a good qualified to technology, nuclear power has a big potential danger to our peace. It is clearly that science has not completely understood nuclear and it may lead to some trouble with that material. The strength of this power is hard to evaluate and it threatens our world. For instance, nuclear can manufacture an atom bomb that can destroy almost a hall country such as Japan had been in the past by the US atom bomb. Moreover, researching nuclear is very unpredictable and challenging for scientists.

To sum up, we can not deny the benefits of nuclear technology have brought to our developing lives. But personally, I would rather suggest that we need to consume that energy effectively and safely to not only protect the environment but also save our world peace.