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Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Thanks to the development of the internet, nowadays, we can buy things online without getting out of our houses. There is some pros, however, we can still see some cons in buying things online, and I will discuss both side of this right now.
More and more people use all kinds of shopping platform to buy stuffs, such as amazon and ebay, which is really convenient and they treat shopping online as a sort of stress-relieving. Instead of going out on these day, especially those days we have to isolate yourselves from social due to covid 19, online shopping apps is the most needed and used platform. When you order a thing from these online platform, you have a lots options with all kinds of price from the highest to the lowest. Moreover, you can have access to the world-wide groceries online instead of going to the local convenient store with limited things you can buy. Additionally, there is a review section from the one buying it before, before you decide whether to buy it or not.
However, I still believe there is some disadvantages of shopping in that way. Shopping online is so risky. We don’t know what is actually in that box delivered to us until we pay the fee and open that box. We can have a refund but the progress is so long and slow with so many actions needed to confirm if the refund is true. For instance, we buy a shirt or a dress online, but turns out, it doesn’t suit you at all. What would you do? Return it and get the refund? I don’t think so. In term of clothe, we should go to the store ourselves and try things on.
Though, there is still some disadvantages but I believe if we buy things online wisely, we can take advantage of those platform and save a lot of time which we can you for many golden oppotrunities.
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