This is my essay if everyone who might be an English teacher read it asap?

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00“Girls Gone Mild”02br
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00Ethan Poindexter02br
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00 Many people, therapists, doctors, and the common man believe that babies are born sexual beings and thus, “physically prepared”, that means that once someone mentally “feels ready”, they’re ready for sex. Whether 12, 15, 16, or 21, sex is all right, moral and healthy (as long as “protection” is provided, of course). But this is wrong, Christian or not, premarital sex should be seen as immoral and unhealthy. If someone has premarital sex it sends the direct message to that person’s spouse that they weren’t worth the safety or the wait. Premarital sex is caused by lust, an outward response to human selfishness, once we defeat lust we can defeat premarital sex.02br
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00President Bush authorized a plan to donate millions of dollars to fight AIDs in Africa and the U.S. and it is already showing signs of success, but pro-safe sex organizations and liberals claim otherwise choosing to ignore it.02br
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00 Pro-safe sex organizations say that sex is a healthy thing to do once you’re “mature”; they say that adults think that they’re kids should always save sex for marriage and that sometimes they just don’t understand. So they teach kids and teens that sex is ok in any form, masturbation, and oral sex, ect. And then they claim that you can still keep your virginity after committing these acts, with a condom or pill of course. All of this is quite strange, because besides the ACLU’s public funding nobody really knows who is funding these liberalists. Some people in the medical profession even venture to say, that the funding is coming indirectly from condom and contraceptive industries, which rely on safe sex practices. None-the-less safe sex organizations are teaching the youth that sex is alright at any stage in life. Premarital sex is sinful, immoral, selfish, and unhealthy; and all of this is caused by lust, we need to remove lust.02br
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00Safe-sex organizations teach in they’re guides to safe sex that masturbation is part of the beginning of sex and that it is the safest sex; these organizations along with some doctors claim that sexual feelings begin at birth and there-for so should masturbation. In fact when Dr. Darcy Luadzers (a famous sexual therapist and doctor) was asked when people’s masturbation processes begin, she answered, “When their diaper comes off.” And when Christian leaders try to refute this and say that this is sinful, they are told that their information, “Goes back to the out-dated scientific writings” (Luadzers, 140) of the Bible. But not only do pro-safe sex organizations call this a normal and healthy process, they also say that shared masturbation is a positive and cool thing where other guys “teach” each other how to masturbate, (like it’s necessary) then they try to peer pressure guys by saying “that most guys do it” and “little more than half do it”. They also teach that the second safest sex is oral sex, because many stds are not yet proven to be damaging this way. Then we also know that safe-sex organizations and doctors tell people that sex with anyone is safe with protection. 02br
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00The same organizations instruct that condoms are first effective 97% and then 86% typically affective, (don’t you wonder how and why contraceptive companies avoid putting the second percentage on the condom container) mainly teaching the 97%, which if you didn’t know is if condoms are used absolutely perfect. They teach other kinds of safer sex practices such as the pill, the pill only helps in preventing childbirth and by the way it has a perfect use percentage of 99%, with a real use percentage of 95%. People are supposed to accept the fact that it 14% and 5% less effective than what it should be, and that it is still immoral.02br
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00It’s not safe; many people know the facts and still go off and have sex because they want it so bad, like cigarettes. Anal sex, that’s your cigar, (barely safe enough to where it couldn’t affect your life permanently) then there’s your basic cigarettes, average intercourse; oral sex would have to be your light cigarettes, (just enough to eventually cost you your health) and then you have your herbs nothing illegal, you know fore sure it’s masturbation. All of these seem to the eye as something pleasing, but what it sex when your genitals look more like mushrooms and flower (scary flowers . . . v-e-r-y scary flowers) than sexual organs. Then these companies hide behind shallow means of morality to protect premarital sex, not even mentioning the idea that it’s selfish not to wait for sex with your spouse, and ignoring the facts that when someone has sex before marriage they are initially cheating on their spouse. But as Americans, we teach morality in shallow terms, now to the average person, sexual morality is just not having sex because you’re pressured into it or because you’re craving it. So yeah, on these terms it seems like it’s ok and alright to have sex because by shallow terms, you don’t think that it necessary to wait for your future spouse or keep your future children safe from the sexual diseases that you could pass to them. But on the real, safe-sex organizations do not actually and necessarily have to believe what their saying, they know that today, with condoms and contraception provided, that among sexually active Americans 1 in 3 people has an std. Nor do they teach that condoms don’t even really protect from STDs, because most STDs are passed from the skin above the condom protected area. Why don’t they teach this I have looked at plan parenthood websites and through (safer-sex guides) and none of them show these facts? They don’t even dare to teach some things like:02br
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00Under the guidelines, United States . . . funds schools to educate children 14 and younger abstinence and faithfulness, with condom education added for those 15 and older. Dr. Marum also noted that a minority of adolescents had sex by 15 and needed education in human sexuality, including . . . how to protect themselves with condoms, before they became sexually active. (Dugger, A4)02br
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00So in essence, most people who have had premarital sex were first taught that it is ok, and healthy, with protection of course. But many people who could’ve saved themselves for their husbands or wives, chose not to because it was healthy and harmless, if only they could’ve been taught abstinence till’ marriage. None teach that when a person who has had premarital sex gets married they have a high possibility to have a marriage that ends in divorce, and that’s without picking up and STD or bringing a child out of wedlock. Even still the possibility of being one in three with an STD, that is way too many, they know this is not ok, and you won’t see it in safe sex guides and actually you won’t find morality in the index of nearly any safe sex guide either. And you might wonder why are Americans being so uniformed, and when asked why not give abstinence programs a try, safe-sex organizations say “. . . it has overemphasized abstinence at the expense of condoms and other prevention strategies.” (Dugger A4) 02br
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00Even in Africa, the most AIDs infected country in the world, abstinence programs seem to be successful and helpful, “Dr. Lawrence Marum . . . Said abstinence programs helped give girls the confidence to resist pressure for sex.” (Dugger, A4) Why have to have sex before marriage, is it necessary? No! Everyone has sinful sexual desires sometimes, when people want sex bad enough, they have selfish sexual thoughts called lust. It’s not just the sex that’s sinful and immoral it’s the lust that’s the main problem. “A sexual thought that pops into your mind isn’t necessarily lust, but it can quickly become lust if it’s entertained and dwelled on.” (Harris, 35-36) Lustful thoughts usually and eventually hurt the person themselves, their spouse, and most importantly God. “When we understand that the very nature of lust is rebellion against God . . . hopefully we’re more motivated than ever to pursue a life of purity.” (Harris, 40)02br
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00So how do we beat lust? Everyone is tempted by lust in different ways, so in turn each person needs a different method of getting rid of lust. Here is a Godly way of defeating lust, first find what triggers your lust, most are outside forces so avoiding things you put into your mind. Some people just measure what they watch, read, and hear; then others who feel that they need more of an extreme solution throw away their TVs, lose cable, or don’t go into video stores. The point is where do you know you struggle, and how can you avoid it. Weird to think of, but true are concepts of what times of day are best a lustful target, and you might be wondering how do you avoid time, but don’t try to avoid time by trying to stop it, (plus it doesn’t work I’ve tried it, no just joshin’ your tators) instead plan on doing other things at that time, typically something you are really captivated by that’s godly, like talking to a good friend on the phone, go see a funny nonsexual movie, listen to worship music and pray, and go eat Leean Chins (this is sworn by it works every time, even when your not having lustful thoughts, just do it). All of the above help and by the way the sesame chicken with fried rice and an egg-roll is to die for.02br
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00The main point of this essay is to prove and persuade you as the reader to see that premarital sex is unnecessary, immoral, and unhealthy. Christian or not premarital sex should be seen as immoral and unhealthy. Because if someone has premarital sex it sends the direct message to that person’s spouse that they weren’t worth the safety or the wait. Premarital sex is caused by lust, an outward response to human selfishness, once we defeat lust we can defeat premarital sex.0-