This is my essay about topic It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?

Accommodation is one of the aspects that college students often pay close attention to. Some people argued that independent living is the ability to take care of yourself from living, be proactive in learning, socially establish relationships, improve force life in all aspects better when living at home with their parents. I completely agree with this view for several reasons.
Firstly. The students from high school transition to university is a time mark the maturity of a young person, to turn 18 when young people need to know how to decide and take responsibility for their actions. No longer can depend on parents to decide, remained in everything. Most of the students succeed in university and then have the spirit of initiative and high independence, gain work experience

The second benefit that independence encourages students to develop a more comprehensive life and academic skills, autonomous living skills will help students adapt to the university environment more quickly. Students in advanced countries, after high school is often going out on their own, work part-time and have a high sense of independence. Even families who can support themselves often let their children take care of themselves or borrow money and make a living on their own.
Finally, when you live alone, you have to learn everything like repairing light bulbs, freezing refrigerators, ... Without the help of others. It may seem like a challenge at first, but it will help you become more independent and feel proud and confident in yourself.

In conclusion, it seems to me that living far away from their parents is the best option for students for the above-mentioned reasons.