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Pitak Posted 22 years ago
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This is my carrer objective for my resume, i'm trying to find a part time job in a resturant. please can someone correct it for me
Having worked in retail service and restaurant, I possess excellent skills in customer satisfaction and team management. With training in architecture and design I am a highly motivated and creative individual with excellent ability to learn. I am professional and skillful and able to communicate to people at all levels of commercial and social contacts.
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I would be careful about the architecture and design part. If I were a restaurant boss I would wonder why someone with such studies has a career objective of working part-time in a restaurant? I would think you were just looking for a stop-gap job until you find something better.
- I would be careful about the architecture and design part.
- If I were a restaurant boss I would wonder why someone with such studies has a career objective of working part-time in a restaurant?
- I would think you were just looking for a stop-gap job until you find something better.
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I would be careful about the architecture and design part. If I were a restaurant boss I would wonder why someone with such studies has a career objective of working part-time in a restaurant? I would think you were just looking for a stop-gap job until you find something better.
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