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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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This is copy for the ad kindly let me know english is ok, rectify if needed

Make a luxurious statement, you don’t just buy bed sheet sets and bath linens from our wide range. You take home the comfort and luxury which promises durability. Our exclusive designs add flavours of lavishness to your lifestyle.



Ecstasy that you can’t escape, welcome to the world of incomparable comfort, beauty & style. Choose from exquisite designs of bed sheet sets and bath linens. Elegant and stylist design just meant for you
  

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Anonymous Make a statement. Y ou don’t just merely buy bed sheet sets and bath linens from our wide range. You take home the comfort and luxury which promises durability .

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  • Anonymous Make a statement.
  • Y ou don’t just merely buy bed sheet sets and bath linens from our wide range.
  • You take home the comfort and luxury which promises durability .
  • In addition, o ur exclusive designs add flavours of lavishness to your lifestyle.
  • Ecstasy that you can’t escape, W elcome to a world of incomparable comfort, beauty and style.
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AnonymousMake a statement.

. You don’t just merely buy bed sheet sets and bath linens from our wide range. You take home the comfort and luxury which promises durability. In addition, our exclusive designs add flavours of
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Sir the sentence,

Ecstasy you can't escape, is this sentence grammatically correct & sounds proper

Thanks & Regards,
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Ecstasy you can't escape-- this sentence is OK, if a little literary, but I cannot say whether it fits the rest of your advertising copy.
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