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The given diagram illustrates how organic waste is recycled to create garden fertiliser.
Overall, there are five stages in the diagram, starting with preparing a plastic container and ending with the fertiliser is ready to be used in gardens.
To begin with, the recycling process of organic waste takes place in a plastic container which has a volume of two cubic meters. The container also has some gaps in two opposite sides of the container to make way for air.
Next, some sorts of waste including waste food, grass and newspaper are placed into the container respectively from bottom to top to form three layers, each layer of them is 15 centimeters thick. Subsequently, nitrogen and hot water are poured into the container with and then mixed with three layers of waste. Once the mixing process has been completed, the plastic container is burned in a high temperature to release heat vapours. After six months, organic waste in the container ultimately turns into fertiliser for gardening.
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