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The given diagrams illustrate how the village of Kelsbey has changed from 1780 to 2000.

Overall, this village was originally a green rural area in 1780, but it experienced some dramatic transformation into an urban one in 2000.

The most noticeable change is that from 1780 to 2000, in the east of the village, there was the removal of all farms and forests whereas the number of residential areas rose considerably. To illustrate, in 1780, there were only 100 houses but the figures increased twofold and fivefold in 1860 and 2000, respectively. Additionally, there were 4 farms and numerous woods in 1780 but both of them gradually cleared and finally disappeared in 2000.

Another remarkable development is the construction of several areas in the village from 1860 to 2000. In 1860, there was a bridge built across the river in the east of the village and a road crossing from the river to housing areas. 2000 experienced a host of facilities added which were schools and sports grounds in the southeast of the village, a road from their areas to houses. To the north of the shops and pitches, some shops were set up along the river and a wetland built at the end of the river. However, the river remained unchanged between 1780 and 2000.