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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
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This is a true incident, please check my grammar!
0 00 Yesterday after dinner, I went out for a stroll with my dog. I unlocked dog’s chain so he can roam freely and I was standing next to my car parked under a tree. I heard a voice as if something is cracking, very thin sound as if it is coming from very far away place. But then after a few seconds a huge branch of the tree fell just next to me, for a moment I didn’t realised what happened. But after coming to senses lots of horrifying images conjured up in my mind and it made me very afraid, if I had have been standing even an inch ahead that branch would have fell on my head and it would have hit me badly and injured me severely. I am really thankful to God that he saved me or else I would have been in hospital or may be strolling in the heaven! 00 0-
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) with my dog. I unlocked dog’s chain (I'd prefer, 'removed the leash' or even better 'unleashed him') so he 01 del 00 can 02 del 00 could roam freely (can I say, run around) and I was standing next to my car parked under a tree (personal preference 'standing under a tree next to my car'). I heard a voice as if something is cracking (I suggest 'heard a cracking sound' - your phrase sounds like it turned out it wasn't a crack but it was), very thin sound as if it 01 del 00 is coming 02 del 00 came from very far away place (doesn't sound natrual to me, maybe 'afar').
- ) with my dog.
- I unlocked dog’s chain (I'd prefer, 'removed the leash' or even better 'unleashed him') so he 01 del 00 can 02 del 00 could roam freely (can I say, run around) and I was standing next to my car parked under a tree (personal preference 'standing under a tree next to my car').
- I heard a voice as if something is cracking (I suggest 'heard a cracking sound' - your phrase sounds like it turned out it wasn't a crack but it was), very thin sound as if it 01 del 00 is coming 02 del 00 came from very far away place (doesn't sound natrual to me, maybe 'afar').
- But then after a few seconds (I'd prefer 'A few seconds later') a huge branch of the tree (personal preference, 'a huge tree bracnh') fell just next to me.
- (F)or a moment I didn’t realised what happened.
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0 Yesterday after dinner, I went out for a stroll (is there any difference if I say 'a walk'?) with my dog. I unlocked dog’s chain (I'd prefer, 'removed the leash' or even better 'unleashed him') so he 01 del 00 can 02 del 00 could roam freely (can I say, run around) and I was standing next to my car parked under a tree (personal preference 'standing under a tree next to my
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0 One more question, is 'up' needed after conjure? 02 br
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00 Oh! I didn't notice your subject until now. I can't find the right idiom to say to you. This is the closest I can thnk of : Live the day as if it were the last. 0-
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00 Oh! I didn't notice your subject until now. I can't find the right idiom to say to you. This is the closest I can thnk of : Live the day as if it were the last. 0-
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0 Thanks Nwe2grammar at least i came to known the mistake i commit for tense usage. Waiting for native speakers comments 0-
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