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Piplot Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

This is a conversation, Is the propositions correctly written?

I hope the question is understandable.

Receptionist: R
Caller: C

R: Olympia Centre. How can i help you?
C: Yes, I'd like to enquire about an advertisement of free gym session. May i do some questions about if that is okay?
R: Bear with me. I have a call in the other line. Sorry to keep you.
C: I was wondering if it could be possible for two of us have a training session together?
R:Can you hold a minute? I'll just see. I'm afraid not. The training session is for one person only.
C:Ok. Could you tell me how much the full gym membership cost?
R: It depends of the level of membership. Have you seen the information on our website?
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Thanks in advance,
  

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Piplot This is a conversation. Are the propositions correct ? Yes, but it has other problems.

  • Piplot This is a conversation.
  • Are the propositions correct ?
  • Yes, but it has other problems.
  • For one thing, it is odd that the training is private; their marketeers would want to have as many participants as possible R: Olympia Centre.
  • Can I help you?
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PiplotThis is a conversation. Are the propositions correct?
Yes, but it has other problems. For one thing, it is odd that the training is private; their marketeers would want to have as many participants as possible

R: Olympia Centre. Can I help you?
C: I'd like to ask about your free gym session—
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If the key phrases are :

Yes/Like/Enquire/Advertisement/ free gym session.

How can i make a sentence using these words?
Thanks teacher. I know my english, my grammar isn't good, but i try to do my best.
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Then just put those few words back into my revision. Post it here and we'll check it again.
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Ok.

I'd like to enquire about an advertisement over/of free gym session.

That is the sentence. I'd like to use those words because is very polite, but i don't know what preposition use after 'an advertisement'. Thanks in advance.
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I'd like to enquire about your advertisement for a free gym session.

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