0
Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
This feels slightly clumsy...
Hi! Is there any way to improve this sentence?
The employee has the right to receive bonuses in addition to the working remuneration, if, in addition to the contracted basic work, he performs other working duties.
Thank you!
The employee has the right to receive bonuses in addition to the working remuneration, if, in addition to the contracted basic work, he performs other working duties.
Thank you!
Top answer
Anonymous Is there any way to improve this sentence? Yes: shorten it. The employee will receive bonuses in addition to his salary if he performs duties beyond those contracted.
- Anonymous Is there any way to improve this sentence?
- Yes: shorten it.
- The employee will receive bonuses in addition to his salary if he performs duties beyond those contracted.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
1 Answers
0
AnonymousIs there any way to improve this sentence?Yes: shorten it.
The employee will receive bonuses in addition to his salary if he performs duties beyond those contracted.
0
Related Questions