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Ayan86 Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

This feels clumsy...

Hi there!

This sentence feels slumsy.. How can I improve it?


Starting with this year’s May 15, the people claiming the state-guaranteed child support will be able to receive it more easily and fourt times faster.


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ayan86 This sentence feels slumsy It is clumsy . org/wiki/Comparison_of_American_and_British_English#Dates ) this year , ayan86 the people claiming the state-guaranteed child support will be able to receive it more easily and fourt times faster. The first "the" is unnecessary.

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  • ayan86 This sentence feels slumsy It is clumsy .
  • org/wiki/Comparison_of_American_and_British_English#Dates ) this year , ayan86 the people claiming the state-guaranteed child support will be able to receive it more easily and fourt times faster.
  • The first "the" is unnecessary.
  • The yellow part is unclear.
  • Which number did you mean?
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ayan86This sentence feels slumsy

It is clumsy.

ayan86Starting with this year’s May 15,

Starting on May 15 (or 15 May

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