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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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This feels clumsy...
Hello!
This sentence feels clumsy... How can I improve it?
We wish to achieve that this city is a place for everyone, where one can be happy to live or visit and where one always wants to return.
Thanks a lot!!
This sentence feels clumsy... How can I improve it?
We wish to achieve that this city is a place for everyone, where one can be happy to live or visit and where one always wants to return.
Thanks a lot!!
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We want to make this city a place that everyone can be happy to live in or visit and always want to return to.
- We want to make this city a place that everyone can be happy to live in or visit and always want to return to.
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We want to make this city a place that everyone can be happy to live in or visit and always want to return to.
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