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In this year’s October, my wife, Jane XXX, bought tickets, by using money whose source is unknown to me, for her and our children for traveling to England.
Thanks!
This sentence feels clumsy... How can I improve it?
In this year’s October, my wife, Jane XXX, bought tickets, by using money whose source is unknown to me, for her and our children for traveling to England.
Thanks!
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This October my wife Jane *** bought tickets to England for herself and our children with money from an unknown source.
- This October my wife Jane *** bought tickets to England for herself and our children with money from an unknown source.
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This October my wife Jane *** bought tickets to England for herself and our children with money from an unknown source.
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