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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Hi!

This sentence feels clumsy... How can I mprove it?

My apartment is in a residential house; one of my daughters lives in the next building, but the other daughter lives in Bordon Village which is 20 km from me.

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My apartment is in a house. One of my daughters lives in the next building, and the other daughter lives in Bordon Village, 20 km away.

— Mister Micawber

  • My apartment is in a house.
  • One of my daughters lives in the next building, and the other daughter lives in Bordon Village, 20 km away.
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My apartment is in a house. One of my daughters lives in the next building, and the other daughter lives in Bordon Village, 20 km away.
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