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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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This feels a little bit clumsy...

Hello!

Is there any way how to improve this sentence? Looks clumsy to me...

Considering that during the time, while Jane lived in England, I, my mother and mother of Jane took care for the child, Jane herself does not have any experience or knowledge how to take care for the child, furthermore she does not have an emotional contact with the child.

Truly appreciated!!
  

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Anonymous Is there any way how to improve this sentence? "way how" is a good guess, but we don't use "way how" in English. Just "way".

  • Anonymous Is there any way how to improve this sentence?
  • "way how" is a good guess, but we don't use "way how" in English.
  • Just "way".
  • Anonymous Considering that during the time, while Jane lived in England, I, my mother and mother of Jane took care for the child, Jane herself does not have any experience or knowledge how to take care for the child, furthermore she does not have an emotional contact with the child.
  • Considering that while Jane lived in England, my mother and I and Jane's mother took care of the child, Jane herself does not have any experience or knowledge of how to take care of the child.
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AnonymousIs there any way how to improve this sentence?
"way how" is a good guess, but we don't use "way how" in English. Just "way".
AnonymousConsidering that during the time, while Jane lived in England, I, my mother and mother of Jane took care for the child, Jane herself does not have any experience or knowledge how to t
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While Jane was living in England, Jane's mother, my mother and I took care of the child, so Jane has no experience or knowledge of how to care for him/her. Furthermore she has no emotional contact with the child.

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