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BW2/3 Posted 20 years ago
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this dating

you really upset me a lot when you did not have a date with me, because I probably found a lot of enjoyment in this dating.


You really upset me a lot when you did not go on a date with me, because I probably found a lot of enjoyment in it.

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Hi, you really upset me a lot when you did not have a date with me, because I probably found a lot of enjoyment in this dating. There are quite a lot of things about this sentnece that are odd in meaning and that are unidiomatic. Let me suggest that you say it this way: You really upset me a lot when you would not give me a date, because I would have enjoyed dating you.

— Clive

  • Hi, you really upset me a lot when you did not have a date with me, because I probably found a lot of enjoyment in this dating.
  • There are quite a lot of things about this sentnece that are odd in meaning and that are unidiomatic.
  • Let me suggest that you say it this way: You really upset me a lot when you would not give me a date, because I would have enjoyed dating you.
  • Your sentence did not start with a capital letter.
  • This probably seems like a tiny error to you, but it is the first thing that I noticed.
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Hi,

you really upset me a lot when you did not have a date with me, because I probably found a lot of enjoyment in this dating.

There are quite a lot of things about this sentnece that are odd in meaning and that are unidiomatic. Let me suggest that you say it this way:

You really upset me a lot when you would not give me a date, because I would ha
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