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Sailsofoblivion Posted 12 years ago
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Third Person Bio?

Hi, I was just wondering if this third person biography is written and punctuated correctly.

Thanks in advance!

Emma Guinness is a student from Glasgow, and she is currently studying English at the University of Strathclyde. She has written her first book ‘Return to Midnight’ and has been published in a number of poetry anthologies and magazines. In addition to this, her work was recently short listed for the the Keith Wright Memorial Literary Competition edited by Chris Agee ('Irish Pages'). She can be contacted at: Email Removed
  

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Only some minor comments: Emma Guinness is a student from Glasgow, (most texts would omit the comma) and she is currently studying English at the University of Strathclyde. her work was recently short-listed for the the Keith Wright Memorial Literary Competition (most texts would insert a comma) edited by Chris Agee ('Irish Pages').

  • Only some minor comments: Emma Guinness is a student from Glasgow, (most texts would omit the comma) and she is currently studying English at the University of Strathclyde.
  • her work was recently short-listed for the the Keith Wright Memorial Literary Competition (most texts would insert a comma) edited by Chris Agee ('Irish Pages').
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Only some minor comments:

Emma Guinness is a student from Glasgow, (most texts would omit the comma) and she is currently studying English at the University of Strathclyde.

...her work was recently short-listed for the the Keith Wright Memorial Literary Competition (most texts would insert a comma) edited by Chris Agee

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