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Things that could be better in my neighborhood
In my neighborhood, there is one thing that could be better. It is the noise. On Sunday, some families here usually sing karaoke with max volume. More over, they always sing in the afternoon, the time most people here take naps so no one can sleep. I think those people should not do so, of course they can sing karaoke but not on all Sundays because people here need a day of relax and peace after a week of noise and hard works. If they sang not so always, every body could have better Sundays.
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