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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing
Thesis topic request
Dear all,
I'm planning to write a thesis, and I need to ask a compamy if they agree to collaborate with me.
Down below is my letter, so could you please check it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
The purpose of my letter is to request your company’s collaboration for my Bachelor thesis. I’ll be finishing my studies within one and a half years and would like to start with my University thesis. I intend to focus on marketing or branding fields and I would appreciate the opportunity to make a research and write a thesis topic for your company.
My name is [name] and I’m a 19-years-old student on the International Business degree at the [University] At the moment I’m studying at the [University] for my exchange term. My area of expertise is International marketing and Sales management.
I have a great interest in your company and I would appreciate the opportunity to gain some experience and knowledge by collaborating with [name of the company]. Could you please let me know if you have any topics regarding marketing or branding departments that you would like to research.
Please find attached my resume.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
I'm planning to write a thesis, and I need to ask a compamy if they agree to collaborate with me.
Down below is my letter, so could you please check it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
The purpose of my letter is to request your company’s collaboration for my Bachelor thesis. I’ll be finishing my studies within one and a half years and would like to start with my University thesis. I intend to focus on marketing or branding fields and I would appreciate the opportunity to make a research and write a thesis topic for your company.
My name is [name] and I’m a 19-years-old student on the International Business degree at the [University] At the moment I’m studying at the [University] for my exchange term. My area of expertise is International marketing and Sales management.
I have a great interest in your company and I would appreciate the opportunity to gain some experience and knowledge by collaborating with [name of the company]. Could you please let me know if you have any topics regarding marketing or branding departments that you would like to research.
Please find attached my resume.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Top answer
It's almost perfect, but there are a couple of errors (I've marked corrections in blue) Dear Sir or Madam, The purpose of my letter is to request your company’s collaboration for my Bachelor thesis. I will be finishing my studies in one and a half years and would like to start on my thesis. I intend to focus on marketing or branding fields and I would appreciate the opportunity to research and write a thesis topic on your company.
- It's almost perfect, but there are a couple of errors (I've marked corrections in blue) Dear Sir or Madam, The purpose of my letter is to request your company’s collaboration for my Bachelor thesis.
- I will be finishing my studies in one and a half years and would like to start on my thesis.
- I intend to focus on marketing or branding fields and I would appreciate the opportunity to research and write a thesis topic on your company.
- My name is [name] and I’m a 19-year-old student on the International Business degree at the [University] At the moment I’m studying at the [University] for my exchange term.
- My area of expertise is International marketing and Sales management.
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It's almost perfect, but there are a couple of errors (I've marked corrections in blue)
Dear Sir or Madam,
The purpose of my letter is to request your company’s collaboration for my Bachelor thesis. I will be finishing my studies in one and a half years and would like to start on
Dear Sir or Madam,
The purpose of my letter is to request your company’s collaboration for my Bachelor thesis. I will be finishing my studies in one and a half years and would like to start on
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