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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Thesis Statement help!!
This is my thesis statement for Harrison Bergeron: Through the plot of the story "Harrison Bergeron" the author conveys an important message to the reader about how total equality is a very dangerous thing and shouldn't be extended to the point of death. This is shown through how everybody has to wear handicaps to hide their positive traits, the government as a dictatorship, and Harrison's death at the end. Okay so I need help with choosing a better literary element instead of 'plot' my teacher says it's too general. Can anyone help me choose a better one that make sense with the rest of the thesis statement?? Please help!!
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'Through the plot of" just seems too wordy and unnecessary. I'd just get rid of it. That leaves this.
- 'Through the plot of" just seems too wordy and unnecessary.
- I'd just get rid of it.
- That leaves this.
- In"Harrison Bergeron", the author conveys an important message about how total equality is very dangerous and should not be extended to the point of death.
- I don't understand what the underlined part means.
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'Through the plot of" just seems too wordy and unnecessary. I'd just get rid of it. That leaves this.
In"Harrison Bergeron", the author conveys an important message about how total equality is very dangerous and should not be extended to the point of death.
I don't
In"Harrison Bergeron", the author conveys an important message about how total equality is very dangerous and should not be extended to the point of death.
I don't
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