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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Thesis statement help!
Decided to write about Steve-O for my college essay about having a significant influence on me because of how he turned his life around from being a loser and failure to being successful and sober. My thesis statement is "Other than being a Jackass, Stephen "Steve-O" Glover has made an influence on me like no other person.". Please help me and tell me if it is good or what it should be!
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The word 'jackass' is inappropriate in an academic essay. In addition, your thesis statement is not specific enough. It should begin something like this: Stephen "Steve-O" Glover has made an impact on my life because [ A ], [ B ] and [ C ].
- The word 'jackass' is inappropriate in an academic essay.
- In addition, your thesis statement is not specific enough.
- It should begin something like this: Stephen "Steve-O" Glover has made an impact on my life because [ A ], [ B ] and [ C ].
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The word 'jackass' is inappropriate in an academic essay. In addition, your thesis statement is not specific enough. It should begin something like this:
Stephen "Steve-O" Glover has made an impact on my life because [ A ], [ B ] and [ C ].
Stephen "Steve-O" Glover has made an impact on my life because [ A ], [ B ] and [ C ].
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Sadly, "Jackass" is a proper noun, a television show and (even more sadly) a movie that seems to captivate boys between the ages of 11 and 25. My daughter was briefly dating a boy who listed the Jackass movies and tv shows as his favorites in his Facebook profile. This caused me no little concern.
Proving himself to be a complete jackass (generic noun), the founder drove into a tree near
Proving himself to be a complete jackass (generic noun), the founder drove into a tree near
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