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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

thesis statement

Is this thesis statement good?
Kurt Vonnegut’s short story, Harrison Bergeron, shows that a perfect world cannot exist because governments are corrupt, true equality is dangerous, and the lack of equality is unjust.
  

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Hi, Seems fine. You need to be able to 'prove' that it is true, of course. Clive

  • Hi, Seems fine.
  • You need to be able to 'prove' that it is true, of course.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Seems fine. You need to be able to 'prove' that it is true, of course.

Clive

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