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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Thesis Statement
The statement below is a thesis statement for my essay, can you tell me what is wrong with any pointers. and sub topic suggestions.
Child centered education is important because it increases creativity, enriches the learning experience and does not allow the student to lose interest in school.
Child centered education is important because it increases creativity, enriches the learning experience and does not allow the student to lose interest in school.
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Two simple changes: "child centered" is used as an adjective and should be hypenated; "and does not allow" should be replaced by a verb that puts the sentence into absolute parallel form. Child-centered education is important because it increases creativity, enriches the learning experience, and prevents the student from losing interest in school. Also, "important" is a vague word.
- Two simple changes: "child centered" is used as an adjective and should be hypenated; "and does not allow" should be replaced by a verb that puts the sentence into absolute parallel form.
- Child-centered education is important because it increases creativity, enriches the learning experience, and prevents the student from losing interest in school.
- Also, "important" is a vague word.
- Find something more exact.
- Your thesis currently has three subtopics.
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Two simple changes: "child centered" is used as an adjective and should be hypenated; "and does not allow" should be replaced by a verb that puts the sentence into absolute parallel form.
Child-centered education is important because it increases creativity, enriches the learning experience, and prevents the student from losing interest in school.
Also, "important" is a
Child-centered education is important because it increases creativity, enriches the learning experience, and prevents the student from losing interest in school.
Also, "important" is a
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