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PraiseinJudah Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Thesis Statement

Hello All,

I am attempting to write an autobiographical essay for admission to FIT in the spring. It's been a while since I've really written anything personal (too busy writing college papers ). I'm having trouble coming up with a thesis statement. Do I even need a thesis statement? How can I tie my life together into one or two sentences? They asked to write the following: an autobiographical essay about your choice of FIT and major, your special interests and awards, honors, employment background, goals, likes, dislikes, strengths, weaknesses, etc. Of course I have the information they ask for, I'm just having trouble getting started. Any advice?
  

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No thesis statement necessary, I suppose, but a catchy sentence in the intro or conclusion about the affiinity of your qualifications and their requirements would not be amiss. Why not whip something up and post it here for our perusal?

  • No thesis statement necessary, I suppose, but a catchy sentence in the intro or conclusion about the affiinity of your qualifications and their requirements would not be amiss.
  • Why not whip something up and post it here for our perusal?
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No thesis statement necessary, I suppose, but a catchy sentence in the intro or conclusion about the affiinity of your qualifications and their requirements would not be amiss. Why not whip something up and post it here for our perusal?
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I'll do that ASAP. It will probably be just the 1st paragraph. I want to start off really strong and develop from there.
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Well here's what I have so far. I am open to all suggestions, so all criticism is welcome. Thanks!


I am a prospective student at the Fashion Institute of Technology applying to the fashion design program. As far back as I can remember, even as a small child, I have recognized a deep passion for the fashion and had the ultimate goal of becoming a top fas
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I am a prospective student applying for admission to the fashion design program at the Fashion Institute of Technology.

As far back as I can remember, even as a small child, I recognized in myself a deep passion for fashion and had the ultimate goal of becoming a top designer for the fashion and entertainment industries. I believe that FIT will be a great building block toward t
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Thank you so much! I'll continue to develop this essay and keep you posted with my progress.

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