Thesis for a formal persuasive essay

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All cars should not be painted yellow by law. People would have a hard time differentiating between normal cars and taxies, the colour yellow attracts bees, The colour yellow is hard on the eyes, Yellow is a unpleasant colour, If all cars were yellow people wouldn't be able to tell who's car belongs to who.
this is my thesis and im pretty sure it suckss help?

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

Hi Cookies;

Welcome to the Forums.

I find it humerous that you would want to persuade someone not to paint their car yellow, or to have a law passed outlawing the color yellow for automobiles.

Is this subject your own invention?

You might want to take the opposite side of this debate, because it might be more difficult to persuade someone to paint their car yellow, or special-order a yellow car.

There are not too many reasons I can think of to paint a car yellow - yellow is a very bright color, so it would be more visible and there would be less risk of someone hitting it, especially in a dark parking garage.

You girl or boy friend would see you coming from a long way away.

You would be eligible to play the "Yellow Car Game."

You would have a conversation piece for your friends. You could joke about it. Most of your friends would have a boring, ordinary color car.

You would have a car with a song written about it.

She weren't much to look at, she weren't much to ride

She was missing a window on her passenger side

The floorboard was patched up with paper and tar

But I really was something in my old yellow car

There are many more associations with the color yellow, so perhaps you can find some good persuasive arguments for a yellow car!

Then again, you might want to pick a different topic altogether.

Best wishes.

A-s

Cookies123 · Answer

thanks and i was given this topic wich sucks but my teacher let me do a different one <img class='emoticon' style='Width:19px;Height:19px;' data-delaysrc='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/1.gif' src='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/1.gif' alt='Emotion: smile'/>

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