Thesis
Hi! I'm writing an essay about the play Othello. My theme is jealousy. Now I have my thesis, which consists 3 main parts and I have to keep them cause my body paragraphs are gonna be on that. Can you check it?
"Based on this play, it is clear that jealousy is responsible for Iago [who] is jealous of Othello, Roderigo is jealous of Othello and Othello is jealous of Cassio."
Please, help me to make it better!
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Anahit1 it is clear that jealousy is responsible for Iago That makes no sense at all. People have responsibilities. Jealousy is a human emotion.
- Anahit1 it is clear that jealousy is responsible for Iago That makes no sense at all.
- People have responsibilities.
- Jealousy is a human emotion.
- It cannot have a responsibility.
- "Based on this play, it is clear tha t (This writing is not good at all.
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Anahit1it is clear that jealousy is responsible for Iago
That makes no sense at all. People have responsibilities. Jealousy is a human emotion. It cannot have a responsibility.
"Based on this play, it is clear that (This writing is not good at all. Make a direct, simple, and powerful
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