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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Thesis
Professional athletes make a positive impact, and leave a lasting impression on children in the fight against children in the fight against childhood obesity.
This is my thesis statement could I get some feedback?
This is my thesis statement could I get some feedback?
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Professional athletes make a positive impact, and leave a lasting impression on children in the fight against children in the fight against childhood obesity. Better is - Professional athletes make a positive and lasting impression on children in the fight against childhood obesity. Clive
- Professional athletes make a positive impact, and leave a lasting impression on children in the fight against children in the fight against childhood obesity.
- Better is - Professional athletes make a positive and lasting impression on children in the fight against childhood obesity.
- Clive
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Professional athletes make a positive impact, and leave a lasting impression on children in the fight against children in the fight against childhood obesity.
Better is -
Professional athletes make a positive and lasting impression on children in the fight against childhood obesity.
Better is -
Professional athletes make a positive and lasting impression on children in the fight against childhood obesity.
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