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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Thesis
Hi, I am wondering if this would be a valid thesis on stating that a good family = good future versus bad family = bad future.
"This is why we as social beings need a strong family, in order for us to not fall into the depths of despair but, to flourish, and to develop ourselves into figures of society who may one day pass on the experiences we have attained and prevent the society from decay."
"This is why we as social beings need a strong family, in order for us to not fall into the depths of despair but, to flourish, and to develop ourselves into figures of society who may one day pass on the experiences we have attained and prevent the society from decay."
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It is too flamboyant. Therefore, as social beings, we need a strong family in order for us to successfully develop into responsible, constructive members of a society which is sustained by the passing on of each generation's knowledge and experience.
- It is too flamboyant.
- Therefore, as social beings, we need a strong family in order for us to successfully develop into responsible, constructive members of a society which is sustained by the passing on of each generation's knowledge and experience.
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It is too flamboyant.
Therefore, as social beings, we need a strong family in order for us to successfully develop into responsible, constructive members of a society which is sustained by the passing on of each generation's knowledge and experience.
Therefore, as social beings, we need a strong family in order for us to successfully develop into responsible, constructive members of a society which is sustained by the passing on of each generation's knowledge and experience.
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