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Rommel Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

These sentences do not contain grammatical errors, do they?

These sentences do not contain grammatical errors, do they?

More often than not, young married couples experience money problems because of unemployment and underemployment. Hence, they have to depend on their own parents for support. No wonder, they find the role of provider a difficult one.
  

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The only grammar error is the use of a comma after 'No wonder'. But I'd word your text like this. eg More often than not, young married couples experience money problems because of unemployment or underemployment.

  • The only grammar error is the use of a comma after 'No wonder'.
  • But I'd word your text like this.
  • eg More often than not, young married couples experience money problems because of unemployment or underemployment.
  • Hence, they have to depend on their parents for support.
  • No wonder they find the role of provider a difficult one.
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The only grammar error is the use of a comma after 'No wonder'.

But I'd word your text like this.
eg More often than not, young married couples experience money problems because of unemployment or underemployment. Hence, they have to depend on their parents for suppor
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What a nice comment! Thank you, Clive.

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