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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Over the 48-month period, the study revealed that the number of A. gambiae carrying circumsporozoite proteins of P. falciparum had decreased from 3.0% to 0.4% between Jan. 2007-July 2008, and Aug. 2008-2010, respectively; therefore, suggesting that the use of ATCs, combined with LLINs, had successfully reduced mosquito populations, and thereby malaria morbidity in Dielmo.

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This is formal scientific writing and details are important. This is already brief and I don't see how it can be made briefer than this without losing important details.
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