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Phuthuy-zin Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

There is an essay that I need help to correct!

0Helo everyone! I'm a new member and I glad to join this forum. 02br
00The first time I really like this forum and want to contribute something for this forum. So my English skill is not comfortable that order me to practise English anymore. This is the first time I depend on this forum for help. If you can help me to correct grammar faults in this essay, I will give you something in reward for this help. 02br
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00Phuthuy-zin0240hrefhttp://blog.360.yahoo.com/blog-dVaNcY8lbr8awvhHfnBu2mUqcSINGLE PARENT ADOPTION (YES/NO)
  

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02br 02br 00Generally, people post their essays here in the forums, and don't make people go to another site to read them. We also do not respond with corrections using an e-mail address - we make our comments right here in the forums. 02br 02br 00You may want to paste your essay here instead of asking us to go your blog.

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  • 02br 02br 00Generally, people post their essays here in the forums, and don't make people go to another site to read them.
  • We also do not respond with corrections using an e-mail address - we make our comments right here in the forums.
  • 02br 02br 00You may want to paste your essay here instead of asking us to go your blog.
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0Hello Phuthuy-zin,02br
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00Welcome to the forurms.02br
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00Generally, people post their essays here in the forums, and don't make people go to another site to read them. We also do not respond with corrections using an e-mail address - we make our comments right here in the forums. 02br
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00You may want to paste your essay her
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0Thank for your reminder. My essay so long that why I want to get a link at here. Also, this is a first time so I did something in wrong way. Next time I won't make some mistakes like that. ^_^02br
00This is my essay, and please help me to correct it if you can. So I'm grateful if you can help me. 02br
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1font00There are some very serious flaws with organization, facts, clarity of though, and grammar. I can see no relationship between adoption and the rest of what you talk about. 02font02br
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00 Single Parent Adoption 01font00How does
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0The first time, I'm very thankful and look at your correction as a first help. Because I attended many forum, but none of them replied for my essay. For this help, I will look at your forum as a good place for everyone who wants to discuss or improve English skill. So I will present your forum address for many people as I can.02br
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0That's what we're here for - I hope the comments I made will help you.0-
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0I already follow your comments to correct my essay. It so interesting that you can help me. I will look at the way you correct as a mode for me to develop my essay. One more time, I'm very thankful for your help.02br
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0This is a paragraph that I want to check for grammar mistake. I hope that you can help me for this entreating help. So please accommondating for helping me.02br
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00A single parent adoption is so popular in social today. Many people are successful and having spare money for living. So they want to have a baby but they don’t want to be covered by
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