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This buffet is opened yearly by Rama who is a mythic hero, he rewarded the king of the monkeys because it helped him in one of his battles, after that, the day has become an annual celebration which the Thais volunteer fruits and vegetables to feed the monkeys, returning the kindness for them.

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Atchan · Answer

I can't correct it, please correct them for me

thanks

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Let me give you a hint.

There are several different sentences here, joined incorrectly by commas. Would you like to try to find them, and start each one with a capital letter and end it with a period?

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Atchan · Answer

Dear Clive

I have written the full story several days ago but I didn't get an expert person who can correct the story well just like you, I've multipled this story twice in different sections in this forum looking for you. so please whenever I write something in this forum please correct them for me because my english skills depend on you. I will not bother you maybe I will write once a day or once in two days but I want you to fix my english.

best wishes, Atchan

An open buffet
for monkeys

Every year, all monkeys that reach nearly 600 all around Thailand's
Provinces are invited to come to an open buffet of fruits and vegetables. This
buffet is opened yearly by Rama who is a mythic hero, he rewarded the king of
the monkeys because it helped him in one of his battles, after that, the day
has become an annual celebration which the Thais volunteer fruits and
vegetables to feed the monkeys, returning the kindness for them. Three tons of
fruits and vegetables are used in this festival buffet. The streets and yards
of Lola-bi Thai city are converted into buffets and an open table for the monkeys
when they celebrate the version of twenty-one of the annual monkeys festival
which is regularly done since 1988. This annual festival has been become the most
important local events which attract groups of tourists to the city in order to
watch an exciting festival which is done specially as an expression of gratitude
to the monkeys for the role that it contributes for the promotion of tourism
for the city.

Clive · Answer

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An open buffet for monkeys

Every year, nearly 600 monkeys all around Thailand's Provinces are invited to come to an open buffet of fruits and vegetables. This buffet is opened yearly by Rama, who is a mythic hero. He rewarded the king of the monkeys because it helped him in one of his battles. Since then, the day has become an annual celebration for which the Thais volunteer fruits and vegetables to feed the monkeys, returning the kindness for them. Three tons of fruits and vegetables are used in this festival buffet. The streets and yards of Lola-bi, a Thai city, are converted into buffets and an open table for the monkeys when they celebrate the twenty-first annual Monkey Festival, which has been done regularly since 1988. This annual festival has been become the most important local event. It attract groups of tourists to the city in order to watch an exciting festival which is done especially as an expression of gratitude to the monkeys. It contributes to the promotion of tourism for the city.

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Atchan · Answer

thank you Clive I will be appreciate for you thanks a lot

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