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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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From: Caroline Medcalf, J. Crew
To: Melinda Jackson
Cc:
Subject: Our Goof, Your Gain!
Dear J. Crew Web Shoper:
At J. Crew we take pride in ofering fashionable clothes at affordable prices. Recently at our Web site you ordered a sensational zip turtle neck cashmere sweater. Which was offerred at the amazing price of $18.
To ensure accurate pricing, we double-check all copy material before it posted to our Web site. Ocassionally, though, we miss a typo. In the case of this cashmere sweater, that $18 price blew right bye our proof readers. Although this stunning turtle neck should have been list at $218. Because of our error we would like to offer you this sweater for only $118 ($130 for larger sizes. If you check our current Web listings, you will see that this sweater is now correctly offerred at for $218.
The eighteen dollar sweater has been removed from your recentorder, but you may reorder it for $118 (or $130) at this special Web address: <<removed>> Only those J. Crew customer affected by the Web price error are being invited to purchase this sweater at this reduced price. Our big goof becomes your big bargin!
You can be sure we’ll re-double our proof-reading efforts for all future Web catalog item. Check out the latest must-have cloths for spring that include handsome seersucker, eyelet inspired by an antique lace pattern, and authentic Irish linens. Now is th time to snatch the things you love as the days grow warmer. Thanks for shopping J. Crew. Where you always catch terrific bargins!
Sincerly,
Caroline Medcalf, Manager
Customer Services
J. Crew
To: Melinda Jackson
Cc:
Subject: Our Goof, Your Gain!
Dear J. Crew Web Shoper:
At J. Crew we take pride in ofering fashionable clothes at affordable prices. Recently at our Web site you ordered a sensational zip turtle neck cashmere sweater. Which was offerred at the amazing price of $18.
To ensure accurate pricing, we double-check all copy material before it posted to our Web site. Ocassionally, though, we miss a typo. In the case of this cashmere sweater, that $18 price blew right bye our proof readers. Although this stunning turtle neck should have been list at $218. Because of our error we would like to offer you this sweater for only $118 ($130 for larger sizes. If you check our current Web listings, you will see that this sweater is now correctly offerred at for $218.
The eighteen dollar sweater has been removed from your recentorder, but you may reorder it for $118 (or $130) at this special Web address: <<removed>> Only those J. Crew customer affected by the Web price error are being invited to purchase this sweater at this reduced price. Our big goof becomes your big bargin!
You can be sure we’ll re-double our proof-reading efforts for all future Web catalog item. Check out the latest must-have cloths for spring that include handsome seersucker, eyelet inspired by an antique lace pattern, and authentic Irish linens. Now is th time to snatch the things you love as the days grow warmer. Thanks for shopping J. Crew. Where you always catch terrific bargins!
Sincerly,
Caroline Medcalf, Manager
Customer Services
J. Crew
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- Why don't you start by underlining the errors.
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