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Tamguatlay Posted 12 years ago
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Themed “Small delights in our lives”, our garden was judged based ...

Themed “Small delights in our lives”, our garden was judged based on community involvement, garden and environment quality and biodiversity. This GOLD award was officially presented to us by National Parks.

1.“Small delights in our lives” -- Would it be better if rewritten as “Small Delights in our Lives”?
2. Is judged based correct? I think based is redundant?

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Themed “Small D elights in our Li ves”, our garden was judged on community involvement, garden and environment quality , and biodiversity. This GOLD award was officially presented to us by National Parks.

— Mister Micawber

  • Themed “Small D elights in our Li ves”, our garden was judged on community involvement, garden and environment quality , and biodiversity.
  • This GOLD award was officially presented to us by National Parks.
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Themed “Small Delights in our Lives”, our garden was judged on community involvement, garden and environment quality, and biodiversity. This GOLD award was officially presented to us by National Parks.
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