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Panicking Posted 9 years ago
Grammar
Theme and rhyme
Can someone tell me what is wrong with this sentence with regards to theme and rhyme of a sentence.
Mary had a little rabbit. Its fur was white as milk. Red apples are what the rabbit likes to eat, and my friend grows these apples on his farm.
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I don't know what you mean by 'theme and rhyme'. Your tenses don't work. You start off with Past tense.
- I don't know what you mean by 'theme and rhyme'.
- Your tenses don't work.
- You start off with Past tense.
- Then you switch to Present tense.
- Do you want to talk about the present or the past?
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I don't know what you mean by 'theme and rhyme'.
Your tenses don't work. You start off with Past tense. Then you switch to Present tense.
Do you want to talk about the present or the past?
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