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Monalisatuan Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

theb yells , the barks ?

Teachers,

Would you please tell me which of the sentences are better/correct ?:

a/The yells and shouts of people and the barks of dogs and the oinks of pigs brought the floating market to life

b/ The noise of people shouting and yelling , and of dogs barking and pigs oinking brought the floating market to life

c/The shouting and yelling of people and the barking of dogs and the oinking of pigs brought the floating market to life .

Thanks in advanve
  

Top answer

I like #c best; #b would be better without the comma.

  • I like #c best; #b would be better without the comma.
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I like #c best; #b would be better without the comma.

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