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Lime papaya 396 Posted 5 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Theatre

could you check the introduction of my essay and perhaps change something, so that it sounds professional?
the theatre has been an interesting form of entertainment for thousands of years.
However, many people tend to think about it as a boring activity that is only suitable for older audiences. They associate it with Shakespeare or Homer and I believe this is a stereotypical image. the theatre has changed over the years and it can be interesting to young people.

  

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Every sentence must begin with a capital letter. Homer wrote two epic poems, and no plays. I suppose there are some plays based on Homer's poems by other authors.

  • Every sentence must begin with a capital letter.
  • Homer wrote two epic poems, and no plays.
  • I suppose there are some plays based on Homer's poems by other authors.
  • You repeat the word "interesting".
  • It is not a very academic word.
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Every sentence must begin with a capital letter.

Homer wrote two epic poems, and no plays. I suppose there are some plays based on Homer's poems by other authors.

You repeat the word "interesting". It is not a very academic word.

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