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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

The World Cup

Could you please check if the following sounds natural?

The World Cup is getting exciting.
Some o watch it in rooms. Others go to sports cafes to support their favorite team passionately with friends.
  

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I'm not sure what you intended the second sentence to say. If it was just "Some watch it in rooms", then this seems too uninteresting and uninformative to bother saying. The rest seems OK.

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  • I'm not sure what you intended the second sentence to say.
  • If it was just "Some watch it in rooms", then this seems too uninteresting and uninformative to bother saying.
  • The rest seems OK.
  • I personally would still write "cafés", even though the word is long established in English usage.
  • I would write "teams" instead of "team".
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I'm not sure what you intended the second sentence to say. If it was just "Some watch it in rooms", then this seems too uninteresting and uninformative to bother saying. The rest seems OK. I personally would still write "cafés", even though the word is long established in English usage. I would write "teams" instead of "team".
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