The way to school
hello everyone, I am writing an essay about the way to school but it is so basic. can you fix it for me to make it sound better and more interesting?
this is my essay:
Every day, after having breakfast, I always go to school by bike. On my way to school, i stop my friend's house to wait for her and we go to school together. I talk about some stories I met yesterday, they were so weird. the environment is very peaceful in the morning, some trees are being planted, in the future they will grow quickly and bigger. beside my way to school there are some villagers who are working, they also get up early to do that. the way was replaced so we can go fast, of course. there will be many interesting things waiting for us.
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Every day, after having breakfast, I [ 1] always go to school by bike. On my way to school, I stop at my friend's house to wait for her and we go to school together. We talk about the day before, especially about unusual events.
- Every day, after having breakfast, I [ 1] always go to school by bike.
- On my way to school, I stop at my friend's house to wait for her and we go to school together.
- We talk about the day before, especially about unusual events.
- some stories I met yesterday, they were so weird.
- the environment It is very peaceful in the morning , and we often see people planting new trees along the road.
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Every day, after having breakfast, I [ 1] always go to school by bike. On my way to school, I stop at my friend's house to wait for her and we go to school together. We talk about the day before, especially about unus
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