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Kenta Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

The way to make Japanese Sake is different from that of wine.

Hello.

The way to make Japanese Sake is different from that of wine.

Is this correct? I made another sentence.

Japanese Sake is different from wine in the process of making.

If you have a better expression, would you tell me?

Thank you!
  

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You don't want that second one for sure. The first is passable, but I'd revise it a little. The process of making Japanese sake is different from that of making wine.

  • You don't want that second one for sure.
  • The first is passable, but I'd revise it a little.
  • The process of making Japanese sake is different from that of making wine.
  • Or, more simply: Japanese sake is made differently from wine.
  • CJ
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You don't want that second one for sure.
The first is passable, but I'd revise it a little.
The process of making Japanese sake is different from that of making wine.
Or, more simply:
Japanese sake is made differently from wine.
CJ
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Thank you, CJ. The sentence you showed me is much better. You helped me a lot!

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