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Quaerereverum Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

The vacation that you didn't enjoy.

Hallo,

  • After getting my permonent resident visa, I traveled to my country to see my parents. In Tehran airport when the officer saw my photo without a scarf in my visa card, he wrote in the last page of my passport, I should get departure permission from the passport office, which I did't since I have a political record in the ministry of information. So, when I wanted to return to Canada, the visa officer refused , to allow my to depart Iran. It was a nightmare for me. I had to be calm and persuade the officer that I didn't have time to go the passport office. Exactly 3 mintues befor my plane take off, he stamped my passport and allowed me to get on the plane.

Thank you for your time and help.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas. Please correct them and re-post your revised text: Hallo , After getting my permonent resident visa, I traveled to my country to see my parents. In Tehran airpo rt w hen the officer saw my photo without a scarf in my visa card, he wrote in the last page of my passpo rt, I should get departure permission from the passport office, which I did't since I have a political record in the ministry of information .

  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Please correct them and re-post your revised text: Hallo , After getting my permonent resident visa, I traveled to my country to see my parents.
  • In Tehran airpo rt w hen the officer saw my photo without a scarf in my visa card, he wrote in the last page of my passpo rt, I should get departure permission from the passport office, which I did't since I have a political record in the ministry of information .
  • So, when I wanted to return to Canada, the visa officer refuse d , to allow my to depart Iran .
  • It was a nightmare for me.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please correct them and re-post your revised text:

Hallo,

  • After getting my permonent resident visa, I traveled to my country to see my parents. In Tehran airport when the officer saw my photo without a scarf in my visa card, he wrote in the last page of my passport, I should get departure pe

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