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Mr. Tom Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
The use of "venture into multiple dimensions"
Hi
Could you please see the bold sentence and tell me if it is natural, especially the underlined part? Any suggestions are welcome.
A man is talking about his producer friend and explaining why the producer was facing financial difficulties all the time.
Frank had ventured into multiple dimensions without careful consideration -- drama, theater, movies --and therefore his funds were depleting at an alarming speed.
Thanks,
Tom
Could you please see the bold sentence and tell me if it is natural, especially the underlined part? Any suggestions are welcome.
A man is talking about his producer friend and explaining why the producer was facing financial difficulties all the time.
Frank had ventured into multiple dimensions without careful consideration -- drama, theater, movies --and therefore his funds were depleting at an alarming speed.
Thanks,
Tom
Top answer
'Dimensions' seems an odd word choice. Why not 'fields' or 'areas'?
- 'Dimensions' seems an odd word choice.
- Why not 'fields' or 'areas'?
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'Dimensions' seems an odd word choice. Why not 'fields' or 'areas'?
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Thanks, MM!
Is the sentence natural now?
Frank had ventured into multiple fields without careful consideration -- drama, theater, movies --and therefore his funds were depleting at an alarming speed.
Tom
Is the sentence natural now?
Frank had ventured into multiple fields without careful consideration -- drama, theater, movies --and therefore his funds were depleting at an alarming speed.
Tom
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