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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

The use of 'to'

Hello everyone. I am writing a mock advertisement for my English class. I would like to ask whether i used the correct form of word for the following sentence. From what I know, what ever comes after 'to' , we have to use root word, but -ing for verb. Am I using my preposition correctly in this sentence? Please and thank you.

We are committed to attracting, developing, rewarding and retaining a talented and diverse workforce. We strongly believe that our employees are important human capital and will provide us with a competitive and strategic advantage. We invite suitable, qualified individuals who are interested to join a dynamic, expanding organization.
  

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Your ad seems fine to me. However, I would use "asset" instead of "human capital" and I would also put and between suitable and qualified and dynamic and expanding. our employees are an important asset In my opinion, you also can't "develop a talented and diverse workforce" but you can train them, educate them etc.

— Ivanhr

  • Your ad seems fine to me.
  • However, I would use "asset" instead of "human capital" and I would also put and between suitable and qualified and dynamic and expanding.
  • our employees are an important asset In my opinion, you also can't "develop a talented and diverse workforce" but you can train them, educate them etc.
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Your ad seems fine to me. However, I would use "asset" instead of "human capital" and I would also put and between suitable and qualified and dynamic and expanding.

... our employees are an important asset

In my opinion, you also can't "develop a talented and diverse workforce" but you can train them, educate them etc.
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