0 Hi, 02br 00I read this advertisement it says, "Accumulating for year's experience. our large database customer network is able to meet with our clients' requirement and fulfuillment." 02br 00Is that sentence correct? How about this, "Accumulating of year's of experience, our large database customer network is able to meet with our clients' need and expectation." 02br 00Please let me know, thanks. 0-
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0 Are you trying to say, 02br 02br 00"Being the culmination of years of experience, our large database customer network is capable of meeting and satisfying the needs and expectations of our clients." 02br 02br 00or, 02br 02br 00"Derived from years of experience, our large database customer network is capable of meeting and satisfying t
0 Hi Temico, 02br 00Thanks for your reply. You answers are very helpful. One more question from me, can we use 'Accumulation of year's of experience' in that sentence, does it sound as good as the two sentences you have suggested? 02br 00Thanks Temico. 0-
0 Hi joeviee 02br 02br 00I would definitely stick with temico's sentences. Also, please note the apostrophe in temico's sentences. he writes 01b00years02b00 (plural) not 01i00year's02i00 (of the year) 0-