the tourist
can i have your comment about my writting specily about grammar
The tourist are important persons in every country because of there good effect in the economy so we must do anything to attract the tourist.
First of all we should keep our country tidy and farming a tree and palm and put a flower in the footway to look nice and bueatiful,also we can attractive them by making carnival and party or special expiation for example Bahrain make a traditional carnival every year near the museum they bring LEWA a band dancer and there are a old woman’s selling HALWAA Bahraini sweet and there are a small kids playing old game which make the tourist happy because the watch another king of carnival, another thing we can attractive them by entire a sport thing for example before 6year there was gulf cup a football match between gulf country which make a lot of people from different country visit Bahrain to witch the much also the fourmela1 match make a lot of people came to watch the first circuit in gulf and to join the great activity and watch the famous car driver like SHOMAKR..
Finally, I think these important things to make tourist love our country and came to visit it many time and to make them feel happy from our country.
Top answer
Dato The tourist are important persons in every country because of there good effect in the economy so we must do anything to attract the tourist. You have a single noun and plural following - you need to check carefully and use on or other: The tourist is an important person OR Tourists are important persons Classic spell-check problem - the wrong form of "their" First of all we should keep our country tidy and farming a tree and palm and put a flower in the footway to look nice and bueatiful,also we can attractive them by making carnival and party or special expiation for example Bahrain make a traditional carnival every year near the museum they bring LEWA a band dancer and there are a old woman’s selling HALWAA Bahraini sweet and there are a small kids playing old game which make the tourist happy because the watch another king of carnival, another thing we can attractive them by entire a sport thing for example before 6year there was gulf cup a football match between gulf country which make a lot of people from different country visit Bahrain to witch the much also the fourmela1 match make a lot of people came to watch the first circuit in gulf and to join the great activity and watch the famous car driver like SHOMAKR.. This is all ONE sentence.
- Dato The tourist are important persons in every country because of there good effect in the economy so we must do anything to attract the tourist.
- You have a single noun and plural following - you need to check carefully and use on or other: The tourist is an important person OR Tourists are important persons Classic spell-check problem - the wrong form of "their" First of all we should keep our country tidy and farming a tree and palm and put a flower in the footway to look nice and bueatiful,also we can attractive them by making carnival and party or special expiation for example Bahrain make a traditional carnival every year near the museum they bring LEWA a band dancer and there are a old woman’s selling HALWAA Bahraini sweet and there are a small kids playing old game which make the tourist happy because the watch another king of carnival, another thing we can attractive them by entire a sport thing for example before 6year there was gulf cup a football match between gulf country which make a lot of people from different country visit Bahrain to witch the much also the fourmela1 match make a lot of people came to watch the first circuit in gulf and to join the great activity and watch the famous car driver like SHOMAKR..
- This is all ONE sentence.
- Rewrite, splitting it into shorter sentences with a different subject in each Finally, I think these important things to make tourist love our country and came to visit it many time and to make them feel happy from our country.
- Consider the tenses you have used.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
DatoThe tourist are important persons in every country because of there good effect in the economy so we must do anything to attract the tourist.
You have a single noun and plural following - you need to check carefully and use on or other: The tourist is an important
0
Related Questions